| A Review of: Poems the Size of Photographs by Jana PrikrylIn his 1983 collection, The People's Otherworld, Les Murray swerved
from his central preoccupations with nature and his own rural youth
to write a series of poems about the modern metropolis. One of those
poems stands out today as especially, eerily, prescient:
The iron ball was loose in the old five-storey city
clearing bombsites for them. They rose like
nouveaux accents
and stilled, for a time, the city's conversation.
In that poem Murray concludes with equal clairvoyance that our
"glittering and genteel towns" are "more complex in
their levels than their heights/ and vibrant with modernity's strange
anger."
Twenty years later, Poems the Size of Photographs returns to examine
modernity, in general, and those two "bombsites," in
particular. In two poems looking back on 9/11, Murray's old mistrust
of all things nouveaux is adjusted to make room for his indictment
of the alternative: the terrorist attacks arise "from minds
that couldn't invent/ the land-galaxies of dot painting// or new
breakthrough zeroes, or jazz." As always, Murray's moral
position is at once invigorating and consoling, but I read a
difference between the 1983 poem and this one that goes beyond his
sudden love of technology's "breakthrough zeroes."
The difference runs through this entire collection, and is heralded
by its title. These poems are indeed the size of photographs, but
having come to love Murray's rambling style, his poems the size of
motion pictures, his essays in verse form, I read these slimmer
versions as shadows of their predecessors rather than rich new
encapsulations. "Full religion is the large poem in loving
repetition," Murray wrote in 1987 in a poem called "Poetry
and Religion", and most of his forty-year career has been spent
realizing the statement. Roughly speaking, the poems that have made
his reputation as Australia's leading poet are poems that eye the
poetry-as-religion theme from every angle, with wonderfully cluttered,
staircasing stanzas that stack details, analogies, anecdotes on top
of one another to provide a whole portrait of his subject. Murray's
poems work the imagination into a fresh limberness; there is a sense
after finishing a bout with his pages that one can think more fully,
more inventively, about everything.
Complementing this structural walk-about is soft, supple language.
Metaphor possesses Murray: in The Daylight Moon, his 1987 collection,
an old-fashioned milk-truck "was the high-tyred barn of crisp
mornings,/ reeking Diesel and mammary,/ hazy in its roped interior/
as a carpet under beaters." In one sentence, Murray has fired
off four separate metaphors for the milk truck-farm, engine, mother,
museum-in a way that miraculously builds rather than confuses the
image. Murray tends to sermonize on behalf of the common man (and
his opinions are always remarkably sane), but you don't quaff a
poem like "The Milk Lorry" to sympathize with those who
deliver the stuff; you read it for the variety of ideas tucked into
its phrases-"the glancing hold was a magazine of casque armour,/
a tinplate 'tween-decks, a seminar engrossed// in one swaying
tradition." His poems offer pretty pictures and new ways of
seeing them.
That combination is less abundant in Poems the Size of Photographs.
The poems here feel slighter in a way not fully explained by their
brevity. Not only does Murray give himself less room to elaborate
thoughts and spin visual ideas around them; he also fills the book
with dry proverbs and shards of wordplay that don't cohere. In a
very nice poem called "Reclaim the Sites", Murray offers
alternative names for city streets, but the cleverness becomes too
cute:
Radar Strip, Bread-Fragrance Corner,
Fumbletrouser, Delight Bridge, Timeless Square?
"Bread-Fragrance Corner" is lovely, and "Timeless
Square" is alright. But "Delight Bridge"? It's
filler inside a poem whose toy-like simplicity does not reward
further play. Is it a sign of the times that short, one-dimensional
poems make this collection feel spiffier and more "modern"
than Murray's earlier works? Brevity and simplicity may suggest
forward motion in our poetry culture, but the conceits behind most
of Murray's new verses are strangely callow.
Many of these poems are less than five lines long, and only a handful
resonate with the clear note of haiku. More often, the quickies
tend to lecture the reader-as in "The Test", which was
disappointingly chosen to conclude the book. Here is the poem in
its entirety:
How good is their best?
And how good is their rest?
The first is a question to be asked of an artist.
Both are the questions to be asked of a culture.
It's ironic that Murray ends the book on so pithiless, pedantic a
note when earlier in the volume he complained that "Too much/
of poetry is criticism now." Already, critics have kissed
such hectoring lines with their quotation marks, probably because
the aphoristic mode seems to tap the poet's beliefs so directly.
"The Test" makes a wise enough maxim; that it fails as
poetry can easily be overlooked.
Poems the Size of Photographs seems deliberately angled to line up
with new ideas, modern developments, recent troubles-and this is
another of its departures from Murray's more traditional oeuvre,
which has concerned itself mainly with landscape, with rural
Australia, Murray's youth on a dairy farm, language, art, and
religion. As in the past, this volume presents lovely glimpses of
nature ("a bolt of live tan water/ is continuously tugged/ off
miles of table/ by thunderous white claws"), but you get the
sense that nature is no longer alone. The handful of poems that
offer a single image of natural scenes free of urban allusions
happen to deal with waterfalls, or with rain, with water falling-and
in a poet as Christian as Murray, the meaning of such images is
transparent. "Brief, that place in the year," he writes,
when a blossoming pear tree
with its sweet laundered scent
reinhabits wooden roads
that arch and diverge up
into its electronic snow city.
That word "electronic" drives a small modern shock through
the stanza, and there is a melancholy significance in the poem's
placement in the book, too, caught between the two verses about
9/11: brief is that place in the year, indeed.
But with perfect thematic symmetry, Murray offers redemption: some
of the loveliest poems in the book deal with the flight of birds.
"Humans are flown, or fall;/ humans can't fly," begins a
sonnet about animals that "throw the ground away with wire
feet." In a poem called "The Body in Physics", injured
birds when released "pause a beat/ and drop upwards, into
gravity that once more/ blows as well as sucks. Fliers' gravity."
In these poems nature redeems our human clay, and Murray partly
redeems the flatness of the rest of the book. He leaves room for
words to develop an image into clarity, and his aperture opens with
exquisite compassion for his subject-as in "Succour", a
poem about refugees in a shelter:
It's like a school, and the lesson
has moved now from papers to round
volumes of steaming food
which they seem to treat like knowledge,
re-learning it slowly, copying it
into themselves with hesitant spoons.
Listen to those soothing repetitions: school, moved, volumes, food,
seem-culminating with "spoons" at the end of the poem.
"Succour" again reinforces the sense that man has sullied
the natural order (Adam and Eve, of course, were the first refugees).
And if nature is snafu'd, then Poems the Size of Photographs attempts
to provide a new language for this state of affairs. The vocabulary
Murray invents (or identifies) is one of images, not words-a
pessimistic gesture, coming from a poet-but he pulls it off as a
lark, with a dash of wit. The book opens on this theme, in fact,
with a poem called "The New Hieroglyphics", which provides
a list of image-symbols deciphered for inhabitants of the postmodern
post-polyglot world. "All peoples are at times cat in water
with this language," Murray concludes, "but it does promote
international bird on shoulder."
References to pictographs, speech balloons, "the different
lexicons," are scattered throughout this collection, signaling
Murray's new interest in overt symbols, with the rudimentary nature
of human communication in the face of cultural barriers and (more
pertinently) cultural conflicts. To embody these messages, Murray
deliberately thickens his verbal strokes and inflicts structural
simplicity on these poems. "The New Hieroglyphics" is
merely a linear list of pictographs, but punchy as many of them
are, the result, overall, is a bit monotonous and jejune. This
type of wordplay was evident thirty years ago, in Murray's 1974
collection, Lunch and Counter Lunch:
why not name suburbs for ideas
which equally have shaped our years?
I shall play a set of tennis
in the gardens of Red Menace
Shall I scorn to plant a dahlia
in the soil of White Australia?
The difference is that a poem like "The Canberra Suburbs'
Infinite Extension" (above) injects a hint of levity, and a
dose of leavening, into a volume generally packed with meatier
stuff. Poems the Size of Photographs presents much less contrast,
in terms of both the weight of its ideas and the forms they take.
These new poems are playful and a pleasure to read, but they offer
no sense of amazement-of, in Murray's own words, "working
always beyond// your own intelligence." I fear Murray had
more enlightening (and more prophetic) things to say about modernity
in 1983, when he didn't install the theme at the overt centre of
his book. This diminutive new volume reminds me uncomfortably of
another stanza from 1987's "Poetry and Religion", with
its reverence for "the large poem in loving repetition,"-"A
poem, compared with an arrayed religion,/ may be like a soldier's
one short marriage night/ to die and live by. But that is a small
religion."
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