| A Review of: New Collected Poems by Marius KocejowskiMatthew Francis has seen through the press the most complete edition
to date of W.S. Graham's poetry. Whether or not this was advisable
is a question I will return to at the end of this article. As it
stands, the book is impeccably edited, contains a useful glossary,
informative notes, a bibliography, and a list of people, which
includes under Montgomerie the entry-"William Fetherston-Haugh
Montgomery (1797-1859), physician who described the changes in the
follicles surrounding the nipples in the early stages of
pregnancy"-and a further list of places. (There is a purpose
to this exercise, since Graham's poetry, even when it moves into
the constructed space' of his imagination, is born of actual people
and places, not all of them easily identifiable.) Douglas Dunn's
Foreword is written in a fine and sober voice, while the editor's
brief but elegant Introduction made me curious to hear what more
he had to say about his subject. The book is unlikely to be surpassed
in scale. Above all, it serves to keep afloat a reputation, which,
during the poet's lifetime, had all but vanished. There was a poetic
dark age, between the publication of The Nightfishing (1955) and
Malcolm Mooney's Land (1970), when people did not even think to ask
whether Graham was still alive. Cornwall was probably further away
from London's consciousness than San Francisco; a Scots poet living
there was not likely to be remembered. It was only in the last
decade of his life, when, against the adversities of alcohol and
ill health, he produced some of his best poems, that he acquired a
small but faithful following. The majority of poetry readers,
however, pitched their pup tents elsewhere. Graham has always had
to survive one fashion or another, and I suspect he will continue
to weather the vicissitudes of popular taste. Only a few months
ago, his 1979 Collected Poems, which, incredibly, was still in its
first printing, was remaindered, presumably in order to make way
for this one. That earlier volume is still worth reaching for.
Graham was a complete poet. Of his kind there are few and still
fewer to come, or at least not until after the professional swill
of poetic verbiage has begun to subside. He was a poet because he
had to be. The greater part of his life was spent in bitter poverty
and doubtless the world will ask whether the sacrifices he made
for his art bordered on the irresponsible. A steady job was anathema
to him, as was anything that would put an obstacle in the path of
an approaching verse. There were times even when he and his wife
lived on soup made of lichen scraped from stone. This said, towards
the ends of theirs lives, they were not without the support of
friends and the small house they had in Madron was given to them
rent-free. While he could be brutally competitive, such that any
other poet sharing the stage with him would have to watch his own
back, Graham was, in the making of his verse, a pure and absolute
voice. My guess is that even had he never published during his
lifetime his collected works would be substantially the same.
If Graham was, to some degree, a "poet's poet", he had
little recourse to other writers and certainly none to academe. The
conclusions he arrived at, regarding language and what lies beyond
it, had nothing to do with fashionable literary theory, although
often he swam unawares in the same intellectual current. The position
he chose, in the wake of Dylan Thomas and the poets of the New
Apocalypse, was to disturb, even torture, the language. As might
be expected, given his appetite for the pure, it would take him
many years to arrive at his stated goal "that I burn bright
enough to see out through the window which my poem is." This
last is from a letter he wrote, in 1943, to the poet Edwin Morgan.
What I find most striking about his earliest letters, published in
the The Nightfisherman (Carcanet, 1999), is the degree to which
they demonstrate a critical intelligence already far in advance of
his actual poetic practice. The problem was in getting there. The
circuitry of his early verse is too overloaded at times. Some of
the poems are so dense as to be unintelligible. As he approached
the end of his life, however, the poems became increasingly finer.
Many of them have to do with language, "the beast in the
space", and the near impossibility of communication, yet the
manner of his poetic exploration is throughout bold and passionate.
What is the language using us for?
What shape of words shall put its arms
Round us for more than pleasure?
It would be a mistake though, to seek to categorise him or place
him in the Forties because he was a poet who, in my view, belongs
to the future. His poetry stands at the crossroads of the highly
sophisticated and the primitive. Should the reader be led into
thinking Graham researched his themes, the truth is quite the
opposite-he drew from whatever crossed his path. One must be forever
grateful to Ruth Hilton who, upon visiting Graham in 1976, showed
him her copy of Johann Joachim Quantz's On Playing the Flute (1752)
because Graham's chance reading of it was to give rise to a
masterpiece, arguably the finest dramatic monologue of our times.
"[Quantz's] prose steered my verse," he wrote to the poet
David Wright. "It helped my imagined gestures." A man who
had by now earned his right to "disturb the language,"
Graham dared to turn arpeggios into "the joy of those quick
high archipelagoes," making of pure sound a physical landscape.
Shall we ever again hear the like? The identification of musician
and poet is magnificently achieved, particularly in the connection
made between them and their common opposite, which is silence. It
is the closest one gets to an ars poetica in Graham's verse.
Karl, I think it is true,
You are now nearly able to play the flute.
Now we must try higher, aware of the terrible
Shapes of silence sitting outside your ear
Anxious to define you and really love you.
Remember silence is curious about its opposite
Element which you shall learn to represent.
The final lesson, aimed perhaps at our celebrity-driven times, lies
in the poem's last four words, which ought to be writ large above
every writer's table: "Do not expect applause."
It is at this juncture that I offer his publishers a challenge for
the future. Although Graham never climbed onto the ghastly bandwagon
the poetry scene has become, where every poet is a performer, every
performer an entertainer, nevertheless the most thrilling poetry
readings I've ever attended were the four he gave in London in the
1970s-two at the Poetry Society, one at Keats House and, the final
one at the Pentameters pub in Hampstead. What made those events so
memorable was the poet reading his poems on a high wire, as it were,
such that one wondered if he would survive his own reading of them.
Doubtless the massive consumption of drink added to the tension.
The nervous mood was such that eruptions would occur in the audience.
"I will cut off your heads!" Graham warned them. He is
the only poet I have seen with the audacity to give an immediate,
rereading of one of his own poems. "I am not mock humble,"
he wrote in one of his letters. Other times he'd whoop and cry,
and, once, quite out of the blue, at Keats's House, he sang a Scots
ballad, demonstrating a fine singing voice. At the National Sound
Archive in London there is a recording of Graham's second Poetry
Society reading-it ought to be issued because there is no better
key to his poetry than that rough diamond voice.
Our age is not conducive to love poetry, perhaps because there is
an inherent distrust of the aesthetic motive that is usually its
source. Nevertheless Graham wrote at least two great love poems,
"I Leave This At Your Ear" and "To My Wife at
Midnight". The latter, a love poem written to another in old
age, is perhaps incomparable in our literature. As in the 1979
edition, the three-page poem is here accorded a section of its own,
as if it were meant to stand in perpetuity upon its own plinth.
Are you to say goodnight
And turn away under
The blanket of your delight?
Are you to let me go
Alone to sleep beside you
Into the drifting snow?
Where we each reach,
Sleep alone together,
Nobody can touch.
Is the cat's window open?
Shall I turn into your back?
And what is to happen?
What is to happen to us
And what is to happen to each
Of us asleep in our places?
There is in that poem an extraordinary movement of the waking mind
which drifts back to the Battle of Culloden (1746). The poet lies
"sore-wounded" peering into the future where his wife,
not even aware he is gone, lies alone: "I'll see you here
asleep/In your lonely place." It is a masterly performance
and, despite it being shorn of any trace of sentiment, difficult
to listen to with a dry eye. And the love that was the difficult
love he had for his friends is again given voice in several brief
elegies, the finest among them, perhaps, being "Lines on Roger
Hilton's Watch".
Which I was given because
I love him and we had
Terrible times together.
The publication of New Collected Poems raises a problem, which I
feared would be the case, when I first heard the book was in
preparation. Admittedly I was greedy for more, hoping for a cache
of hitherto undiscovered verse, though I knew this was unlikely.
The problem is this: what actually comprises a poet's oeuvre? Should
it be what the poet himself wishes it to be, or should it be for
others to determine? The answer to this is not always clear. We
have had instances of poets, Virgil among them, being rescued from
the impossible standards they set for themselves. And then there
are poets, Vernon Watkins, for example, who have never been accorded
their rightful due. We have moved beyond those areas of slackness
and rescue into a rather more brutal regime. There is virtually no
delicacy where there is a quick buck, or even a critical reputation,
to be made. And such are the pressures in publishing and academe
that even those with the best of motives make their errors in
innocence. We have already been through this with Philip Larkin's
Collected Poems the publication of which would have had him turning
in his grave.
In the case of Graham, the way is clearer. When, as Francis rightly
points out, Graham defended his early work as being "other
objects with their own particular energies" surely he was
defending only those youthful poems that he wished to preserve.
After all, he did live to oversee the publication of his Collected
Poems when he was already close to the end of his writing life. The
few poems he had yet to produce were later gathered in Uncollected
Poems (Greville Press, 1990) and it is this slender pamphlet,
published under the guidance of Graham's widow, Nessie Dunsmuir, a
lady of fine critical intelligence, that most truthfully extends
the oeuvre. I began to have doubts with the publication of Aimed
at Nobody (1993), containing work that Graham would have declined
to include in any collection. The New Collected opens with The Seven
Journeys, originally published by Poetry Scotland in 1944, and which
one contemporary reviewer described as "a forgery of the poetic
currency." It ends with the abysmal "With the Dulle Griet
in Canada" which, at best-that is, if one is feeling particularly
charitable-could not have been anything other than notes towards a
poem. Graham, in his Collected wisely did not include any of the
poems from The Seven Journeys, nor did he come even close to whittling
down "the Dulle Griet" to the four or five lines of poetry
that might have been embedded there. Should a poet of his considerable
worth be bracketed so, between the indigestible and the execrable?
This collection effectively throws the balance at a time when Graham,
one of the finest poets of the second half of the twentieth-century,
has yet to be accorded his rightful place. I speak with the unease
of one who wonders what he would have done in Francis's shoes. The
damage, if damage is what it is, can be undone at a future date. I
would much rather that any future collected, or even meticulously
selected, poems (with, of course, a CD recording tucked in at the
back) ended with the delightful "A Walk to the Gulvas".
Let us go back, Reader,
You who have observed
Us at your price from word
To word through the rain,
Don't be put down. I'll come
Again and take you on
Be well wrapped up against
The high moor and the brambles.
Sadly, when Graham wrote those lines, he would have been physically
incapable of such a hike.
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