| A Review of: Midgic by Paul VermeerschDouglas Lochhead's Midgic is as long and slender as a ribbon of New
Brunswick coastal highway, and just as pretty. The book itself is
another exceptional example of the printer's art from Nova Scotia's
Gaspereau Press, an independent printing and publishing house with
the reputation of producing some of the finest-looking trade
paperbacks in the country today. The luxurious paper and delicate
typography make a fittingly lovely setting for Lochhead's quiet,
meditative verse.
If the title seems a little arcane and strange at first, then you're
probably not from New Brunswick. Midgic is a small hamlet about
10km northeast of the city of Sackville (of which, incidentally,
Lochhead was recently named poet-laureate). It is a place where one
can witness, "a pillowed sea/ again the mouth/ touching the
white beach/ out there" and where "laughter rolls like/
eggs across the snow"
Such gentle imagery hints at great fondness, and in the preface to
the book, Lochhead comes clean: "This is a love story. A
celebration. A gathering of lyrical word-moments which reveal how
one person came to know and care for a village." Given the
subject matter, one man's enthusiasm for rural surroundings, one
might want to draw comparisons with Wordsworth. In it's execution,
however, Midgic has more wide-ranging antecedents.
There are 74 of these "lyrical word-moments" all told.
In both form and function, they resemble spiritual mantras, and
while reading them one might hear tiny echoes of the stark, declarative
lines of Rumi or Khalil Gibran, or of the natural, contemplative
precision of Japanese haiku. Each numbered instalment is a Zen-like
illustration, a minimalist encapsulation of the poet's observations
on the people and landscapes of Midgic, but taken individually,
these miniature poems sometimes suffer from the limitations of their
sparseness.
No individual poem is longer than nine lines, and the lines are
markedly short. Certainly, innumerable poets all down the ages,
from King David to Sappho to Emily Dickinson (whom Lochhead
apostrophizes in "Midgic #24"), have proven substantial
magic can be conjured with a handful of words, but the best modern
practitioners of such modestly-proportioned verse (I'm thinking,
along with Dickinson, of American imagists H.D., W.C. Williams, and
early Ezra Pound) were always faithful to the adage "it is
better to show than to tell."
With so little room to manoeuvre, the component epigrams of Midgic
slide dangerously close to triteness and sentimentality, occasionally
slipping over the edge. This happens whenever Lochhead merely
declares his affection for the village (the final line of the book
is, unfortunately, "Midgic, I love thee."), rather than
using his copious lyrical and descriptive talents to paint a verbal
picture that could trigger corresponding emotions in the reader.
It may be better to view these poems as simple links in a considerable
chain. Only when read as one long poem, rather than as a suite of
smaller ones, do the scope and gravitas of Lochhead's tribute
converge, becoming akin to a vista, a picturesque, bucolic settlement
glimpsed all at once from a hill. Like the village itself, the
composition named for it is populated with individuals, with
individual strengths and weaknesses, but only when taken together
do they become something as complete and as pleasant as Midgic.
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