| A Review of: An ABC of Belly Work by Jennifer VarkonyiPeter Richardson's second book An ABC of Belly Work possesses the
ability to fulfill Tom Wayman's fondest wish: to see the subject
of daily work come into its own as a worthy theme in writing; a
high-realist, dirt-under-the-nails contender to challenge the
reigning big three themes of death, love and nature. This is not
to say that this poets bears the mark of Wayman's agenda-driven
influence. Rather, he does something much more interesting: the
best poems in this book succeed in such a way as to both prove and
disprove Wayman's contentions regarding art and culture in society.
Perhaps that's too enigmatic, too cutely paradoxical a statement
(Wayman would no doubt be irked by its potential obscurity-factor).
But there's truth in the paradox.
In 1976, Wayman, writing in Inside Job: Essays on the new work
writing, considers the subject matter of the prevailing literature
and its effect on contemporary Canadian society. Significantly
absent, he argues, is a body of writing that deals with the experience
of working for a living. Meanwhile, the available literature,
according to Wayman, contributes dangerously to "cultural
escapism":
"this writing is part of a larger culture industry that, in
all its branches, does not encourage us to examine our daily lives,
to understand the sources of our problems, and to act individually
or collectively to improve our existence. The negative term for
these products of our culture is that they are escapist. And as
long as our literature overwhelmingly leads us into the bondage of
beautiful dreams, or into following the imaginary problems of
impossible people, our inevitable return to daily reality will be
a disappointment."
It goes without saying, of course, that the subject of working for
a living is certainly a worthy one. . .I dispute, however, Wayman's
call for such a rigid prerequisite to a particular artistic endeavor.
Further, the fact that this prerequisite actually has everything
to do with vaulting personal experience above skilled expression
seems to me to undermine any potential such an endeavor might have
as art.
Wayman wants writing able to reflect the experience that the majority
of Canadians have of working for a living. He has, in his demagoguery,
made many assumptions on behalf of that majority. The most specious
of these is that which maintains that this majority cannot read or
interpret literature or art that functions on more than one level.
He typically brandishes examples such as the poetry of Eliot and
Pound to make his case air-tight, citing their "difficult and
extremely cloudy" nature as reasons people believe that poetry
is something they cannot-and possibly are not supposed to-understand.
Granted, maybe Pound's Cantos isn't the best way to initiate a group
of people familiar with auto-manufacturing rather than Modernism,
but that's not to say that the sole alternative is to read or write
poetry whose only formal quality (as bolstered in Wayman's tract)
is the "anecdote".
An excellent case in point is Peter Richardson. An airport ramp
worker for twenty five years, Richardson opens his new book with
the title poem, whose vigour could warrant a poetry-sized sticker
cautioning "contents under high pressure":
Here are the tie-downs for securing the dead,
Dry ice, nuclear medicines, cages
Full of raging minks or monkeys
That would clamp down on a glove,
Transforming it into a handle
You could lift the cage with.
Here are suitcases full of shaved differentials,
bowling balls, ploughshare parts,
bags whose contents give the impression
their owners do squat thrusts
on the decks of submarines
at Captain Nemo Camps for aspiring
middle management cadre.
The anaphoric "here" in each of the five stanzas comprising
the poem's first section not only lends immediacy to the images
being drawn out, as though passing before our eyes on a conveyor
belt, but also creates the sense of a militaristic drill: some
sergeant with mirror-shades barking out detail for ramp work. The
effect is a voice that is precise and perceptive, full of humour
that belies the matter-of-fact delivery. The language is clear and
simple, yet the depth and richness of its formal qualities save the
writing from falling into common, Waymanesque narrative.
This collection of poems is a strong second for Richardson. His
themes are work, separation, new love, new life, family, remembrances,
history, and fancy. The best poems are those in which Richardson
lends his senses to us: the smell of the brewery in "Trackside
Villa Apartments", the unbridled jolt of a newborn in
"Packet", manic sifting of image and instance when faced
with a step-son's suicide in "At Hotel-Dieu", the lingering
ineffable quality of a stolen kiss in "Rogues". Richardson
manages-and herein lies his strength-effortlessly to seam concrete
description of everyday experiences with the vivid interior life
that inevitably accompanies them. Language is always front and
center, and though sometimes he delves into the abstract (roughly
the second half of the book seems to be in another key, one more
meditative and introverted), he does not drop into obfuscation.
"The words are endowed with maximal weight," wrote British
poet Michael Hofmann, in the LRB, of Lowell's early work. This same,
"maximal weight," can be found in Richardson's most
successful poems.
A couple of poems in the book, however, stand out for their brilliant
rendering of experiences that are not had everyday, nor can they
be had by everyone. I have seen Peter Richardson read several times
in Montreal (he has recently moved to Gatineau), and on each occasion
he has included the following poem in his repertoire. He stands
casually with a hand in a pocket, his voice unhurried, holding the
book-and it seems his poems-at a comfortable arm's length."
Suitcases do get misrouted' I say", and thus begins the
fabulously taut "Standby":
as he swabs my testicles with yellow
disinfectant, and one at a time,
separates the two halves of my
scrotum with forefinger and thumb,
wielding a local anesthetic, which
as I discuss the two automated
baggage sorting terminals, one
in Denver, the other in Hong Kong,
renders small talk possible.
Not only is this remarkable for plumbing (no pun intended), the
vasectomy as material for poetry, but also for the careful interplay
of the voice that we all use to get through uncomfortable situations,
that which speaks of the work we do or the conditions of the roads
and the weather, and the will of the body to act out, to do something.
The poem continues: "Surely / my hands don't want to be parked
/ on my chest, assisting from afar? / They want to stray to where
tubes / are being cut, ends cauterized, / future paternity
nul-and-voided." Again, the subtlety of the language (the hands
that wish to "stray") coupled with the searing finality
of the procedure create a perfect balance between gravity and levity.
Whenever I turn my attention to this poem, I still clearly hear
Richardson's own reading of it, remarkable for the way it affably
carries you through the procedure, perhaps as was his own experience,
marveling at the end at how efficient it all seems; and though there
will be no outwardly visible sign, it is the inside-knowledge that
shades the external. The final lines are innocuous on their own,
but steeped in what has come before, they are charged with significance:
"I slide off the bed-table, dress / and begin a week of
lollygagging / far from the site of my livelihood: / those festivals
of Airbus-319s, / wheeling up to painted stop lines / where stevedores
are standing by."
There is also, in this book, a feminine counterpart that weighs in;
a yin to the above yang. The "Coracle", for example, that
hits the ground running with "Resident reaches in with latexed
fingers/ between two-push contractions to say: It's not enough.
Look, the head's / not turned all the way down." Instead of
putting the reader, let alone the speaker, at arm's length from the
action, (and any reader who has witnessed a birth will attest it
is more affecting than the most suped-up action flick), the poem
"reaches in" and puts us right in the middle of it. The
scene morphs from circus ("clown nurse wields/ the suction
cup") to see-saw deck of a ship in a roiling sea ("He's
a deckhand on a hide boat in a gale./ As someone chants, the floor
tilts./ It's littered with bloody compresses./ Bilge nurse foot-sweeps
these aside.") The energy that comes off this poem is palpable,
and there is not only an authentic blend of anxiety ("Good
God, / thinks the husband. They're winging this.") but a rich,
imaginative humour (the attending doctor "looks like a Mtis
trapper getting ready / to weave babiche into shoe frames / for
walking over smoking drifts"). Richardson's trademark
perceptivity and hi-fi vocabulary are at their peak here.
To bring it all back home, this collection not only proves-a la
Wayman-the suitability of "work" as topic for poetry (even
"adhering" to the kind of work writing Wayman advocates:
concerned with events, referential, and providing an insider's
perspective), it also demonstrates-contra Wayman-that form and
linguistic striving need not be relegated to the realm of the
difficult and obscure. I'm reminded, here, of how Simon Armitage
once praised Ted Hughes's poetry for its proof "that clarity
and complexity can exist simultaneously, like clear, still water,
into which a person can see to a ponderous depth." Perhaps
when confronted with what seems complex, we just need to relax into
it a little, trusting that our instincts will most always give us
a starting point for a drop into that "ponderous depth."
Certainly it seems to me that this poet-whose poetry flexes the
muscle of language and pulls the weight of the stuff of life-hopes
that his poems will "work" on readers in exactly that
way.
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