| A Review of: Sap: A Mystery by Des McNallyLet's be honest from the start, Author (and protagonist) John Swan's
latest mystery Sap is not an elegant book. Nor is it written with
much finesse.
In my opinion, Swan's second foray into the mystery genre (his first
effort, The Rouge Murders, was well received), will appeal to a
relatively small market, for despite what I think is an attempt by
Swan to write something akin to the very popular Mickey Spillane
novels, Sap doesn't succeed because there's little if anything that
is attractive about its protagonist.
While the back cover speaks of the novel being "very funny"
the reader must understand that this is not George Burns type of
humour; it's hard-edged, tungsten coated stuff that will be welcomed
only by the most serious devotees of the style as they trace Swan's
descent into, and adventures in, the demi-monde of East Toronto.
Swan, widower, alcoholic and unhygienic private detective, first
greets us in his Hamilton apartment in the company of the requisite
wise-cracking "Blonde Bombshell" Meg Maloney. For some
reason (that isn't made clear to us), the couple takes us to the
underbelly of Toronto where we are introduced to drug users, drug
dealers, murderers, tarts and rogue police-and this is to mention
only the more civic minded members of the community we encounter
in Swan's nether-world.
It may be an overstatement to suggest that Swan must have had beside
him a glossary of obscenities and depraved acts as he wrote the
book. This narrative is replete with them. In addition, the partnership
of Swan and Maloney is an extremely odd one. Sex is constantly in
the air but consummation never occurs as the distaff member of the
duo vetoes it. However, Meg seems to be seriously aroused by violence
and spends considerable effort persuading Swan to fight any available
body, so there's no shortage of beatings and blood.
While this certainly isn't your consummate "feel good"
offering, there is still an element of the author's style that
nudges you to continue reading, if only to reach the conclusion of
the tale and discover how the author's plot actually plays out!
Despite feeling a little dispirited, drained, and not a little
confused after putting this book down, I still believe it would be
interesting to see Swan, (the author) give Swan (the detective) at
least a few redeeming qualities, and tackle a project more subtle
and plot driven. And while it's safe to write about places you know,
the less references made to local politicians, places and events,
the better. Puzzle your readers with plot and not local issues.
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