| A Review of: Vacancies by Jeffery DonaldsonThe word vacancy is surely more cheerful than other terms of
emptiness: gap, fissure, gulf, hole, void. These latter terms point
to something missing, a lack or absence of what might otherwise
still be there. A vacancy on the other hand is full of promise and
opportunity; the suite is vacant; no one has preceded you or laid
claim to what might be yours; you are free to move in. Of course
vacancies, where property is concerned, are more associated with
rentals than with owned accommodation. You can make your deposit,
transport and arrange your things, but the place isn't yours to
keep, and eventually, when the grim lease expires, you will leave.
Jennings's sensibility, insofar as his title and several of his
poems invite a guess at it, stands somewhere between Wallace Stevens's
imaginative clearings-late winter emptinesses that reveal a
"readiness for first bells"-and Elizabeth Bishop's
"Filling Station", with its world of temporary stop-overs
and high-strung intransigence. But still more centrally, this first
volume of poems is about limits, about what might hold or contain
a unified life:
"She looks at the walls,
the room's shape.
Her mind dispenses
old possessions
into new homes.
She wonders
at the prospect
of the new,
thinks empty
space audacious
in the face of memory."
Our possessions make a kind of memory theatre; passing days turn
to the furnishings that in time make an architecture of their own,
more expressive of our intimate, loving arrangements than the walls
that housed them. This is property, as Northrop Frye once wrote,
in the sense of what is proper to one's life, or as in the french,
what is one's own. But Jennings is equally as conscious of how
poorly we possess such private property. The longest section of
this little book-and the one most evocative of its unity-is "Elgin
County Estate Auction", where the gatherings of a long life
are dispersed into the marketplace:
"You are here represented in a world of things
brought to a barn in a pasture to a grudging
dispersal
into an incongruous parking lot
Your accumulated offerings
escape their sovereign chronology
and scatter in a creative entropy."
A dissipation of energy. The scene recalls the image of sparagmos,
the tearing apart of a body and dispersing it to the elements. A
sense of sacrifice and pillage pervades the series-mercenary dealers
winding covetously among the tables-but it is countered by a tender
speculative inquiry into the actual belongings of a life-who lift
this doll, that antique lamp under our imaginative inspection.
Their passing into these poems surely embodies something of their
recreative potential, and Jennings seems aware of the fact. He gets
telling work done in that phrase "creative entropy," which
seems an interesting variation on what Wallace Stevens would have
called decreation. In Jennings's sense, for any winding down to
be creative there would have to be some sense of the dispersed
property becoming part of a kind of cultural composting, an entering
into other lives in their own hoardings and arrangements. The same
might be said of any poetry that lasts (I can see a poetics of echo
working itself out in the idea, obviously relevant to some of
Jennings's own poems, for instance his Stevensian "Motivation
for Metaphor").
The scatterings of property recalls the original initiative behind
all notions of property, for nothing is more proper to us than our
own body. The spaces that Jennings looks into, dreams of occupying,
enters, and departs from, are as often our own shapes and forms as
architectural structures. But with an elegiac turn, our bodies too
show up most of the time uninhabited, alienated, vacated:
"Betrayal stalks the cornfield.
Old Jack Strawhead's in his usual place
crucified in Grampa's old black topcoat
and garbage bags for pants. Human
but for hands,
he's a menacing grotesque
beneath his murder of ravens.
His hat, upturned in the dirt,
gathers rainwater like a bath
and his fierce canvas face,
torn to scraps for stalks of grey matter,
cradles two small eggs, like dreams."
A lovely idea this last one: the dilapidated shell of a scarecrow,
cobbled together out of spare human and natural parts, fails at the
work of deterrence it was made for. Its mind forms an actual and
figurative nest of grey matter and nurses to life what it should
otherwise be keeping at bay. And so a broken body gets on with its
creative work, in particular a work that it could hardly have managed
when it was whole. In the fine sestina "Fetishcraft", and
in a sadder register, comforting dolls are created to make up for
whatever was missed in the loved ones they were made to resemble.
The ransacking of an old clothes closet becomes the resurrection
of a body in time:
"Look long enough and you're looking at a body tailored
by time to each skirt, jacket, cardigan....
A body once at home in ruby, violet, emerald. Not tall,
but broad in
the shoulders, strong if not large. Modest about necklines
but not
quite shy, strong and vital even in age. A presence
preserved in the artisan's hand."
In the end then these various vacancies are not about persevering
absences, but presences preserved. The front cover photograph shows
one of the empty stone bodies of the Peterborough Petroglyphs, whose
free-limbed ecstatic dance is uncannily reminiscent of Blake's
"Glad Day" or "Albion" (itself eerily evoked
in a later poem about, of all things, mattresses). The cavity of
the body is carved out in three dimensions; its airy mass cupped
in stone.
To fill out such a debut performance, one would only want to see
these revelations embodied in the poetry's own body, its prosody,
tone, voicings, schematic and formal intelligences. I've no space
to go into detail, but in a fine piece entitled "If, Then This.
Then That", the rhetoric of a quasi-philosophical cause-effect
logic is applied to a whimsical lounging about on a weekend afternoon
(If we are doing such and such, it must be Saturday...). What
happens though is that the logic gives way to a syntax of elaboration,
a luxurious suspension of its algorithms, concessions made to each
swaying from argument, and a patient allowance for imaginative
apercus along the way. The poem takes its time, as it were. Jennings's
distinctive tone has the absorbing feel of the pantomimist whose
mock palm-probings create the walls they seem to press against. And
all the while the body is filled out, cleared in a sense for whatever
unspoken word might choose to move into it, as into a promising
vacancy.
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