| A Review of: Verandah People by Lyall BushThe best short story writers curve their art around suggestion. The
plume of smoke runs in two directions, too-back down the chimney
into the troubled house, and drifting up into the blue erasure of
the sky. Length can vex the balance: longer tales gravitate to the
moral density of the novel, whose scale demands more than than wispy
suggestion; shorter stories shrink into anecdote or haiku, only
rarely finding the controlled angina of a Beatles song. (I'm thinking
of "Eleanor Rigby".) The great writers of the short story,
from Poe to Chekhov to Joyce and Borges, thread character, scene,
scenario and desire onto a few social facts and fabricate work with
the lustre of a blueprint: imaginative fruition that still points
to a world elsewhere. Joyce's stories of decision and delusion in
Dublin imagine an Ireland with a dire, dying glow. Edgar Allen Poe's
tales of the uncanny and of furious detection show us how the Old
World's ghosts are re-purposed in the gloaming forests of the New.
Writers who don't account for this thistledown tend to tell stories
without much valence, as people in English departments used to say
in the '80s. Jonathan Bennet's and Joanne Soper-Cook's new collections
of stories, different as they are from one another, share this echo
problem. Both are able writers, but neither gathers together a
narrative with any of the ambition of, say, Chekhov's "The
Lady with the Dog", which begins as a story of self-absorbed
travellers having an affair and only gradually takes on nuance and
movement, to the point that the fear that Chekhov captures on the
last page is exquisite. A few scattered sentences about the sea,
about steam blowing out of a Moscow dining club, convey the wrenching
feeling of ice and despair inside a life-changing decision. These
moments, and a certain drifting movement, are the story's genius.
Reading the twelve stories in Jonathan Bennett's Verandah People,
I wanted Chekhov's restless eye to tease this something else into
the sentences. Beginning with the best story in the collection,
"Verandah People", Bennett, a native Australian who makes
his home now in Port Hope, Ontario, appears to be heading there.
Drift and death are his main subject matter: in this first story
we watch the series of unscheduled stops that Marcus, a house-painter
separated from his wife and son, makes in the day or so before
ending own life. Having had his child taken from him Marcus takes
all that he has left in a sort of unspoken recompense. And he does
it with a macabre flair, nailing one hand to a gum tree on a hill
overlooking the very project he is to start the next day-repainting
the verandah of an older woman.
The Christ motif carries to "Groping Head", which tells
the strange account of an older woman's death some years later. We
know it's the same woman because her name is Mavis and because the
look of her verandah, facing a hill of gum trees, was established
in "Verandah People". I liked that, particularly that the
connection is slight, a kind of random fender bender about which
the author makes nothing. In this second story, Mavis dies naturally,
but in her request to be buried on top of the hill she complicates
things for her family. There is a bureaucratic hurdle about private
cemeteries to overcome and a permit arrives just a day before the
burial is scheduled. As a result, night falls before the men have
finished digging the plot. They walk back down the hill for the
night, leaving the coffin untended. When the narrator, Mavis's
nephew, returns in the morning it is mysteriously empty, and in a
panic he fills it with his aunt's notebooks to give it weight,
telling no one. A few days later the ghost of his aunt Mavis appears
to him, looking young, full-figured, tanned, and laughing.
Other stories sit with the unsettled feeling, or they descend into
horror: one follows brothers as they go on a racially motivated
attack on a Native family; another tells of a teenager being mangled
in the surf by a shark while his brother looks on. We watch a
red-haired girl drown in a swimming pool, and we see how an older,
childless couple live out their lives of regret. Some of the
characters link across stories in the slight, glancing way that the
characters in the first story do. All are brief and shaped as
mysteries that the narrators have no interest in explaining.
The title comes from the first story where the verandah forms some
rhetorical punctuation:
"In the painting he'd seen at Mavis's, the thing missing, the
part that should have been included, was a person. Maybe two people.
Such a sunny day and such a colourful garden. Why did the artist
stay inside but paint the outside? A verandah is outside. But it's
a shelter, kind of half in, half out. So it wasn't a painting of
the garden, it was a painting of the verandah."
The house painter's art school background accounts for the inward
gaze, a world elsewhere that cues us to other rough transitions
between worlds. It's a nice figure, but then verandahs start popping
up in all 12 stories, and often distractingly, and with an increasingly
mechanical entry. The first verandah makes sense-painter, eye,
life-decision. After that the verandahs become clever intrusions
where they could be nodes quickening thoughts could attach to.
Bennett's own eye is one of his strengths and I imagine that one
day he will reach beyond the stoic fatalists he writes about in
this collection, and to better effect.
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