| A Review of: Look for Me by Gwen NowakEdeet Ravel loves to write. Maybe she lives to write. Ravel claims
that even though she has been writing since she was 12 she has never
experienced writers' block. Now 59, she has, not surprisingly,
produced a large opus, including novels, prose poems, a comic cartoon
book, and children's stories. More surprisingly, she has rarely
submitted her work to a publisher, even though she received early
affirmation of her talent, starting at age 16, with best short story
in Canada by a high school student, best piece [a prose poem] by a
university graduate in Canada, and the Norma Epstein National Fiction
Award for Lovers: A Midrash [1995].
But Ravel did decide to seek a publisher for Ten Thousand Lovers,
the first novel of her proposed Tel Aviv Trilogy. So confident was
Ravel that she submitted the first portion of the manuscript without
a covering letter. In virtually no time she received a request for
the full manuscript, followed quite promptly by an offer to publish.
A writer's dream.
Fast forward the dream to the publishing of Ten Thousand Lovers in
2003 which was followed by nominations for a host of awards: the
Governor General's Award, the Koret Jewish Book Award, the Quebec
Writers Federation Award, and Amazon.ca/ Books in Canada First Novel
Award-as well as best book' notices by Quill and Quire, Globe and
Mail, and Hadassah WZO. What an auspicious launch for Ravel's Tel
Aviv Trilogy. Readers and critics would eagerly anticipate book
two.
They didn't have long to wait. Look for Me promptly appeared in
2004. It has been awarded the Hugh MacLennan Prize for Fiction.
With nary a break in pace book three of the trilogy, Wall of Light,
is slated for publication in summer 2005. In fact, a description
of and excerpt from Wall of Light is already posted on Ravel's web
site. As Ravel said, "Writer's block? Never been there."
In Look for Me Ravel reprises key elements of Ten Thousand Lovers.
Once again she explores the theme of "love in an impossible
world." The "impossible world" is Israel,
"impossible" because of the chronic conflict between
Israelis and Palestinians. In both novels Ravel parses the countless
ways that the conflict bedevils the relationships of Israeli citizens.
A pro-Palestinian peace activist herself, Ravel imbues her male and
female protagonists with the same perspective and ideals. But she
does not project a one-sided point of view. The literary awards
already received attest to the fact that Ravel's trilogy does not
degrade to one-sided pot boiler propaganda.
The mise-en-scne of Ten Thousand Lovers and Look for Me is the
intersection between myth and the modern world. Ravel sets a pattern
for the trilogy's male and female protagonists with Ami and Lily
of Ten Thousand Lovers. Their names are coded pointers to the big
picture' being painted by Ravel: Ami means my nation' and Lily is
borrowed from the biblical Song of Songs. Ami and Lily are unique
individuals with believable biographies in real time even though
their story echoes the biblical love story, a story which has its
own antecedent in the ancient myth of Adam and Eve. Ami and Lily
shelter one another at home in their garden paradise (Ami does the
gardening) but they have to earn their living in the highly conflicted
world beyond the garden gate. In words taken from the Song of Songs,
"ten thousand lovers", Ravel's title suggests that her
narrative, her trilogy, is ultimately about everyman and everywoman.
The big picture indeed.
Look for Me tells the story of Dana and Daniel who meet, fall in
love, and discover that they are so alike that they even dream the
same dreams. As with Ami and Lily, their lovemaking reprises the
full body erotic joy of the Song of Songs. Realizing that they are
"almost one person" they give each other a new name,
significantly the same name, Daneli. Their living room reminds of
the primal garden paradise: they paint one wall black, place a
mirror at its centre and plant around it green foliage with
heart-shaped leaves. Ultimately, but not surprisingly, Daneli as
mythic androgyne is bedeviled by real time tragic flaws and local
politics. As in Ten Thousand Lovers the interplay between ancient
mythic time and current events is the underlying tension of the
narrative.
In Look for Me, Dana is the narrator. Like the woman of Song of
Songs Dana takes the initiative in her relationship with her lover,
from her first sighting of Daniel as musician performing at her
cousin's wedding feast and later when she initiates their first
sexual encounter. But Ravel adds another biblical nuance, moving
forward from Song of Songs to the Book of Daniel. Like the prophet
Daniel, Dana has visions in the night, dreams which she faithfully
records in a journal covered with a copy of Raphael's Madonna and
the Fish. In an opening coda Ravel describes a dream which shows
Dana caught between her real time pro-Palestinian activism and her
desperate need to "introduce waking-life logic into the
dream." As the story unfolds this reader couldn't help but
think of James Joyce's famous phrase: "History is a nightmare
from which I am trying to wake up." It is in the un-graced
nightmare world of exile from the garden that mistaken identities
[TTL] and misbegotten dreams [LFM] lead to the tragic separation
of the lovers. And it is also the world where the sons of Abraham
take deadly aim at each other, making Israel a house divided.
In both novels, it is the woman's lover who disappears. The reader
knows from the outset that he has gone. The mystery, and the narrative
purpose, is to uncover the why of the lover's absence. In Look for
Me Dana searches for Daniel for eleven years. Her torment of
separation resonates with, even replicates, the torment of the
woman of Song of Songs who searches every highway and byway for her
beloved. But in the real world of modern Israel there are hard facts
on the ground to be dealt with, namely the worsening situation
between Israelis and Palestinians. Tellingly, Dana's personal
unhappiness does not interfere with her passion for justice.
Throughout the years of searching for Daniel she continues her
dogged prophetic witness by photographing the humiliation of the
Palestinians at Israeli checkpoints. Meanwhile she earns her living
by writing pulp fiction, romances crafted according to the publisher's
formula for romantic intrigue, sexual encounter and, of course a
happy ending with a wedding. Dana calls her novels "junk
romances"; after she sends the finished manuscript to a publisher
whom she never meets, she doesn't bother to find out their titles
or to look for them in print herself.
In her real life' fictions, Ravel does not use formula even though
she intentionally borrows and modifies patterns from the biblical
text. (Her first published fiction, Lovers: A Midrash, was an
experiment in this genre.) Ravel's weddings take place at the
beginning of the narrative, the sexual encounters are somehow both
suggestive and explicit at the same time, and the endings are laced
with the complexities and ambiguities of the world as it is. If the
ending of Look for Me seems altogether too coy, even contrived,
about a certain paternity issue, it does help to remember that truth
is often stranger than fiction. Ravel has earned her reader's
"willing suspension of disbelief."
It seems natural to foresee hosts of future students in the humanities
department of universities in Canada, Israel and beyond delighting
in the assigned task of searching for and critically evaluating the
literary and biblical clues woven into Ravel's fiction. For example:
an undergraduate student is required to write an essay on the
relevance of Ravel's choice of epigraph for Ten Thousand Lovers, a
question taken from Shakespeare's Twelfth Night: "What country,
friends, is this?" Or: A postgraduate student is inspired to
write a thesis exploring the relationship between that opening
question and the epigraph for Look for Me taken from King Lear:
"And take upon ourselves the mystery of things, As if we were
God's spies."
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